I read your story on Scribophile & came here to find more of yours. This is totally ** hot :)

Holy HELL that was awesome!

haha, oh wow. interesting

wow

Reading this just after Absinthe Desire was a good idea. I really needed the light atmosphere. This was really fun to read.

This is amazing! I love how descriptively you captured every moment, and also how mythology stayed tyed into it throughout.

Wow...tat was good...GOOD JOB^^

okay, so you know what i think up to the 'condoms and lube part' which *gigglegiggle* was adorable

- and the whole jock being thrown for a loop thing too

'tripped on my own weakness and fell' - i kinda don't get what you mean

aw, the apartment is all jock-like danky and aww the bed is all un-made

very nice 'plucking the muscles'

and josh has just turned into something larger than a jock

LOL CELESTIAL BUREAUCRACY

AWW the main character is adorable - i don't think his name's been mentioned

wings attached to his heel would have made the gesture awkward - the guy is comparing josh to hermes, right?

aww, it's a geek having sex, i just realized how adorable that is, with him being all metaphorical all the time

aww, that's so sweet

this is really nice, and very hot and just aww so sweet