The rhythm seems a little off in just a few places, but overall, good work.

Hazellin

So true...but doesn't everyone, really, have to be a little fake? Else what would they have to hide behind.

Oh gosh, I know. This is making all those emotions I said were dormant come up again...Great job! Uhg, I'm gonna be fuming for a little while, but that is what a poet is supposed to make you do. God bless!