 violin-lady13 2006-09-23 . chapter 1cool! i like really random poems, and this one certainly fits the bill. it's cool that you get to write poetry for school! i certainly don't, although as a general rule i do like to write sort of free-form poems. kudos to you for making this one rhymne! if there's one thing i'd change is use a few more vivid verbs and exciting adjectives--that would make it more random, which i assume you were going for. |