|Reviews for Did She Write Poems?|
| morbid-fantasies 11/10/06 . chapter 1
Aww this is cute _ In a melancholy kind of way, but still cute. I guess that would be how me and the person in my situation would be if I actually /gave/ him the poems instead of locking them in my notebooks, but yeah. I do like this. Brava.
| RobHemmens 10/4/06 . chapter 1
I really like this. I'm usually not a big fan of loose-form poetry (as you may have noticed, I like my metre and rhyme). The subject matter is a great idea, the sentiment well expressed. It really struck a chord with me :)
One suggestion on layout. Have you thought about the way your poems look? I personally would've left an obvious gap between "You replied." and "Now am I..." to mark the two halves of the poem. Still, I'm a big fan of this.
| The Reverse Edge Blade 9/16/06 . chapter 1
"just someone you once knew". Really sad poem. And well-written!That person who just replied the same thing over and over again to all those questions...that's really cruel, especially that cold job!Uchiha Hatori