I think is the one you've written that I can relate to the most. The writing style is good, because it can make you see more than the words. Well done ;-)

I'll point out though that I think that the line 'to powerful to forget' should be "too".

keep writing

Beautiful piece dear. *hugs*

As always, your work continues to improve sweet one. Bravo! Please keep it up.

This is brilliant! Amazing work! Write on.

Anna _