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ten pts above average 2006-09-27 . chapter 1
haha I love it!! and I agree...magazines make us feel so ulgy sometimes...some girls have even committed suicide and they dont realize that those girls who are supposedly "perfect" have eating disorders and arent healthy...this is awesome you have no idea! going on my favorites :)...I'll be sure to review more!
chocohound 2006-09-22 . chapter 1
This is a good poem that says a lot. I suffered through an eating disorder for a few years, because I saw some form of "glamour" in it, but now I realize it's all just stupidity, and we should be proud of who we are, not fixated on what we should look like. Anyway, I saw a lot of truth in your poem, and I really liked it. You use your words so well, I've loved everything you've written so far. You're definetly going on my favorite authours list!
All Alone With Her Thoughts 2006-09-16 . chapter 1
I agree. Why can't we just learn to love our bodies?Thanks for reviewing my haiku!~Rowan~
citrus scented 2006-09-16 . chapter 1
ok im glad i did read the an because ill admit i was taking offense. but i love the imagery, and hey i wish I could relate. I understand how this must feel though. "in her stilettos

t u r n i n g

heads round and

round?

" why is it I have a sudden urge to watch mean girls...? hehe love it.
girl with rad i o 2006-09-16 . chapter 1
you're right, it isn't fair.but we learn to love ourselves eventually, right?love this, by the way.
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