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Reviews For: Dies Irae

crazychic7278
2007-07-12
ch 1,
abuseStory is really awesome! Keep up the awesome job
Confluence
2007-04-29
ch 1,
abuseI loved the chapter. Have to agree, wouldn't have guessed English was your second language if you hadn't said so - it was so richly detailed I could not help but fall in love with your style! Even so, you targeted the exact sentiments of a student's feelings for their teacher. I should know... >_>

Hope you create another chapter. You've had a great start. :)

~Confluence
Anon
2006-11-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, I wouldn't have known that English was your second language had you not said so. That was really well written!
Aphotic Euphony
2006-11-08
ch 1,
abuseOh my, what if your teacher reads this?

Your english is very good. I wouldn't have guessed. Well done.
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