Reviews for Head up in the Clouds

DarthKader 2006-11-21 ch 1,	abuseI really like this arf. It's cute, and normal; something I can never accomplish, please keep up the good work.
spiffy-sophia 2006-09-25 ch 1,	abuseOkay, I'm not going to diss your rhyming anymore, it's excellent in this one! Haha. I love the line "thoughts intertwined with lace." I'm not even sure what it means but it's so pretty. Haha. You're very good for your age, much better at poetry than I was. Keep writing!
Nemonus 2006-09-18 ch 1,	abuseAh, I like this one. Cool lines like "To bring me back to reality just shout" give it a modern flair; others , especially "Listening to how someone sings" give a very personal and therefor ringing-with-truth angle to it. "peoples histories" needs an apostraphe.
Arichos 2006-09-16 ch 1,	abuseThis is crazy, each verse has a specific letter to follow with an awesome flow through the poem. Really well done, good job
berryburn 2006-09-16 ch 1,	abuseAh, the wonderful little world in our head ;)It's a nice poem. I think it's well written and very daydreamy like in it's voice.