Piano?
This would make a wonderful rock song.
I already have the beat in my head.
But definitly an evil voice sould sing it, or at least deep and scratchy.

I loved this and it would make a great song, loved the last couple of the lines (oh pretty little rag doll...ive been beating you for years) great job

this would make a really cool song! i like it a lot! the imagery in the beginning is good. then it starts to get repetitive. considering it's a song that could be good.

p.s. review me back pretty please?