Beautiful! You describe it well, very well, and a lot of pensieve parts in here. A lovely situation, I liked this a lot. Good job! Oh, and btw, thanks so much for reviewing "Teen Magazine" too.

it's sad. i don't like reading sad poetry. even if it is really good. i liked the bee, and the way you described the childishness of the playing. the poem has a roundness to it that i liked a completeness.

I liked how you linked it all back together into something absolutely wonderful! Great work!

The imagery is nice and I liked the entire childish feeling to it. Good job.

Thanks for the review.