wow, i really like the falling thing...that made me thought of alice...and the "now" in the end is really great...really strong...


you did a very good job...

im just wondering about the parts that you quoted...i mean you quoted them but you dont think they're great?...i think they are (sorry for this)...


truly yours...

I loved this one. very simple and easy-flowing, but a powerful message.

and I hate it when FP messes up the formatting :P

the last two lines...i think many people could relate to. this is awesome.