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| Freaked 2006-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI |
| rust phoenix 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is very beautiful and emotional, I especially like the way you portrayed anger and abstract thought. I thought the rhyming was excellent and it didn't sound forced at all. This was definitely a strong piece, from start to finish. I can't pick a favorite line because I loved the entire poem. |