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| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-06-07 ch 1,  | abuseI like this! |
| little boy on her bike 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abusethis is kinda depressing, in an excellent sort of way. |
| sarah1491 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. ;) I like how the last line is italicized, it makes it kinda cool. (oh, and unique I might add ;) hehe.) - Sarah |
| brokendreams21 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abuseThat's so...sad and pretty at the same time. Aw...I feel so bad for her. =( Happy endings always make me smile, but sad endings are always the ones that are the most memorable. I really liked this little bit. It was good in the way that it didn't spoil the effectiveness of the ending of 'Zora Ink' but added to it. Great job! |
| SirScott 2006-09-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was cool. I liked how the vampire refered to her victim as prey. Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~ |
| gabriellafaith 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abusewow. that was...different lol in a good way dont worry update soon |
| WyrdWolf 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseMy prediction was right! It IS hot. (you'll see in my e-mail) ^_^ I like this. It was kind of...angsty, in a way, but Zora's portrayal was great. A man who looks like Braeden...at least Zora was satisfied. Great work! Shane |
| Durandel 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseDARK! Man that was creepy, but it was good, the way you wrote it made it good. |
| Anaare 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseWhat a wonderful dark story! Though I have not read much of Zora Ink, I really enjoyed reading this piece. I'll have to check out the rest sometime soon. The title works well, too. Simply "Him". Well done and keep at it! P.S.: Thank you for all the reviews! Greatly appreciated. |
| Spirit Tigress 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseThe end was kinda sad. Even if it wasn't intended to be funny, I always thought the prey thing was kinda hilarious. |