omg im so thick i can't believe i didnt relise she's Gemma's and Joseph's daughter! lol aww *cries* do we get to know more about what happened with Gemma and Joseph? and if she still see's ghosts etc? pwetty please? :D

now im loving this story more lol, but im always unsure about sequels when they involve the characters from the first ones children... (if that made sense lol)

but on the other hand i think it'll be a gd story

oh and with the whole Italian theme i thought i'd add some input... lol i mite be going to Italy this summer! coz my pen pal wants me to go over and meet her wow so scared lol. but excited if i do go, coz i've never been, but it looks like such a great country, and my uncle is italian (he married into the family so im not... lol)

kat x (midnightdream5)

me again lol fancied a change in senery so thought i'd start this one lol :D

omg! excellent prolougue! it gives u just the right amount to get ur tastbuds going, and make u want more lol

i have to say ur writing is getting better and better (not that it wasn't b4)

kat x

Ohh...its picking up! I cant help but wonder...do you know someone in the mafia? Or do you just like them? (oh...wait stupid question! nevermind...

Nice, very nice.

Well,this looks like its going to be a fun story...

i'm about to squeal! they got married and had KIDS! the whole time after she said her uncle was there, i was thinking "hey! oh i hope it's Luca!" and it was. yay, i love this. that's sweet naming their first born son after Lucio. this is so great. update soon! :D i can't wait to find out what going to happen at dinner. haha! that should be fun.

Yup, still not really cliche. Awesome.

Hey, I like the last name Borgata. It rolls off the tounge.

I hope this isn't going to turn into one big cliche, because it has a very good begining and it would be a shame to ruin it.

hm really good so far. update soonmegan

oh now that last line was funny! i like this chapter. Salvatore! haha! it's Lucio's last name! awesome. this should be good. :D update either story as soon as you can.

Very intriguing so far! I find it hilarious how EVERYONE jumps to "Italian conclusions"; if your last name is Italian people's first reaction is to make some sort of mobster/Sopranos/Godfather joke about it. (I can sympathize.) It'll be interesting to see where this whole mobster thing goes and what Rachele has to do with it.

And kudos for the intelligible, clear, and comprehendible language. It's not overly wordy or too vague. Good job.