Ha, well I think I might one of those "tongue-piercing punks" without the piercings. My parents don't want me getting any piercing on my face- ever, but we'll se about that. Right, the story. I think it was good, but the cancer thing was too pedictable. Yes, I do feel for the girl, but I don't believe in blending in. I believe in standing out and saying what I think, so at first I couldn't understand this girl. I still liked the story though, especially Andrew. He's nice, which definitely is good. And I would hate it if people treated me differently if I had cancer. And actually, I think it might be people like Andrew who make cancer patients not give up, even with the horrible chem and what not. And stories like these are those that motivate people. Whether it's a problem related to love, an illness or anything in the world. These stories can cause change. A few typed out words. Fancy that!

Oh wow...romance and tragedy. You're into the whole kill two birds with one stone thing, eh? :)

Just joking...I liked it. I wanted more, but it was good for a one shot. :)

GAHH!!
I loved it
it was sad, but i still loved it =]

aww.. that's so cute! they met up again!=)

This isn't one of your favorites, but it's one of mine. It almost made me cry. What a perfect moment for that boy from your childhood to return...wow. This was really well written, too. Excellent job!

this was REALLY good! i think you should consider maybe making this a fic. it might be really good...

that was so cute, i just might go read it again.

That is so sad I almost cried!

you really have some original ideas huh? hehe..

that was kinda weird though, like how could she just go through school without having any single friend? is that even possible?

Oh I liked it alright! A bit rushed but I loved this! Wow. So sweet. ^_^

Gulistanlik

Sweet and sad. One of my best friends had leukemia, but she recovered two years ago after battling it all of 5th, 6th and 7th grades.

That ending with the last sentense, "And I was kissing him back," was practically perfect for the most part.

nice story, I'm sorry, but I just had to point this out.
Her last name is the same as my algebra teacher- I guess it's common... ^O^

Aw thats so sad, but sweet none the less. Got me thinking what I would do if I got a letter like that. Well written, good job!

Oh, that's so sweet! A bit sad though :(