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| Artemis of the Golden Apple 2008-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseThis isn't one of your favorites, but it's one of mine. It almost made me cry. What a perfect moment for that boy from your childhood to return...wow. This was really well written, too. Excellent job! |
| ellebelle 2008-02-19 ch 1, anon. | abusethis was REALLY good! i think you should consider maybe making this a fic. it might be really good... |
| melbell 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abusethat was so cute, i just might go read it again. |
| zanessa1215 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseThat is so sad I almost cried! |
| OrangeStar13 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseyou really have some original ideas huh? hehe.. that was kinda weird though, like how could she just go through school without having any single friend? is that even possible? |
| gulistanlik 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseOh I liked it alright! A bit rushed but I loved this! Wow. So sweet. ^_^ Gulistanlik |
| fictitious facades 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseSweet and sad. One of my best friends had leukemia, but she recovered two years ago after battling it all of 5th, 6th and 7th grades. |
| your harbor 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThat ending with the last sentense, "And I was kissing him back," was practically perfect for the most part. |
| Crewger 2007-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abusenice story, I'm sorry, but I just had to point this out. Her last name is the same as my algebra teacher- I guess it's common... ^O^ |
| Pinkamoo 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseAw thats so sad, but sweet none the less. Got me thinking what I would do if I got a letter like that. Well written, good job! |
| wandless 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abuseOh, that's so sweet! A bit sad though :( |
| NO LONGER USING 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was painfully sweet and I loved every moment of it. Keep up the good work!~Laci |
| Chocolate Herrings 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I feel like the whole messenger boy being her kindergarten sweetheart is stretching it a little bit... but good writing. Sweet message. |
| xPink Blossomsx 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseAww that was so cute and sweet! :) Good job! :D |
| jekodama 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseHey! I was wondering what had happened with you, it has been quite a while since your last update of Fateful Friday. I liked this piece, it's touching. I think that it can be a prompt for something longer. Well, gotta go, I'm hungry and I'll have cheesecake! yummy... cheesecake... Until the next review! |