 fatbird33 2008-08-26 . chapter 1i liked the line "tear stained eyes" |
 Daiysis 2008-05-11 . chapter 1I've read few of your other haikus and I've noticed that you have a tendency to write with simplicity and yet get very powerful emotions across to the person reading. I find it really hard to do that, and with that said, it looks as if you do it so easily... Great work |
 .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-01-27 . chapter 1I generally find haiku to be too short and emotionless, but you've captured my interest with yours. I loved this one. It is... so true, for so many people. Wonderful job.
-stix- |
 Aomera 2007-10-20 . chapter 1i love the second line especially. works really well as such a short piece. all the poems of yours ive read are so sad! but theyre good so yeh. well done! :) |
 O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.style 2007-07-26 . chapter 1wow, nice job. in a matter of short words, you nicely captured or described the emotions. |
 j'aimemavie 2007-06-12 . chapter 1oh no, that's so sad... but its really good |
 LivingAngel37 2007-05-03 . chapter 1Sounds like how my ex left me. It still hurts. |
 Jodi147 2007-04-30 . chapter 1An oh so familiar feeling...good stuff ^.^ |
 CrazyTurtles 2007-04-24 . chapter 1I know exactly how that feels. Great job showing so much pain in so little of words. And thanks for the reviews. |
 star-wars-rocks 2007-04-20 . chapter 1this was very nice and full of emotion. you know that everyone's felt like that at least one time in their life. i loved it! |
 Alameda 2007-04-10 . chapter 1Rad stuff. I often overlook haikus, but this one really caught my attention |
 peteygirl 2007-04-09 . chapter 1i have felt like this so many times. so so so many times. |
 eraced 2007-04-04 . chapter 1darkly beautiful. nice work.~erAced~ |
 a silenced revolution 2007-04-02 . chapter 1oh, I adore it, it's so sad. Lovely. |
 rira-chan 2007-03-20 . chapter 1great work! it's very full of emotion and whatnot. i really really liked this.
~rira-chan
P.s thank you for your reviews on my poetry! |