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| Daiysis 2008-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseI've read few of your other haikus and I've noticed that you have a tendency to write with simplicity and yet get very powerful emotions across to the person reading. I find it really hard to do that, and with that said, it looks as if you do it so easily... Great work |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI generally find haiku to be too short and emotionless, but you've captured my interest with yours. I loved this one. It is... so true, for so many people. Wonderful job. -stix- |
| Aomera 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abusei love the second line especially. works really well as such a short piece. all the poems of yours ive read are so sad! but theyre good so yeh. well done! :) |
| O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.st... 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abusewow, nice job. in a matter of short words, you nicely captured or described the emotions. |
| j'aimejohnstamosilesttresch... 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseoh no, that's so sad... but its really good |
| LivingAngel37 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseSounds like how my ex left me. It still hurts. |
| Jodi147 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abuseAn oh so familiar feeling...good stuff ^.^ |
| CrazyTurtles 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abuseI know exactly how that feels. Great job showing so much pain in so little of words. And thanks for the reviews. |
| star-wars-rocks 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abusethis was very nice and full of emotion. you know that everyone's felt like that at least one time in their life. i loved it! |
| Alameda 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseRad stuff. I often overlook haikus, but this one really caught my attention |
| peteygirl 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abusei have felt like this so many times. so so so many times. |
| eraced 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abusedarkly beautiful. nice work.~erAced~ |
| perpetual questions 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abuseoh, I adore it, it's so sad. Lovely. |
| rira-chan 2007-03-20 ch 1, | abusegreat work! it's very full of emotion and whatnot. i really really liked this. ~rira-chan P.s thank you for your reviews on my poetry! |
| Lausell Morales 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseMost of us can really relate to this. This haiku has a ton of feeling and is realistic. Loved this! Great job! |