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| RoseLife 2008-04-03 ch 1,  | abuseCUUTE well done Simons hilarious! ^^ |
| j.d. egan 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is interesting, or rather intriguing. I believe, though, that this must be continued. It's utterly hanging. Yet, as I've said it's really intriguing. So do continue this if you find your way to the story. |
| Inkbl0t 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuse**, that was funny as hell. Despite my 'avoid-slash-fics' policy, I really, really, really liked this one. XD |
| Half-BloodGrlPirate 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abusehey i loved this i think u should keep this going at least for a couple more chapters i want to see what happens between them thanks, b.j./Half-BloodGrlPirate |
| fivestar ice 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abusei kinda wish you would write more of this story, but at the same time its great the way it is |
| rodeoclown 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I forgot to review this! It was hot, of course. Your love scenes are always hot. I liked the part where Simon got scared. That was my favorite part. His character was pretty cool. And the rock throwing thing made me laugh. It was like every time the story started to get too cliche or veer towards boring, something idiosyncratic like that would happen, which made it good. I'm still not sure if I consider the ending a proper ending, or a cliffhanger, yet. |
| Amorelle 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abuseKawaii! Poor simon!! you should continue it! it'd be a great story what with the blackmailing sister, the geeky gay kid and the (now)gay jock. haha cliche but still fun ^-^ hehe apple jacks are made of sugar ^-^ *hops up and down* |
| Rachizzle 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseOh... I liked this quite a bit. ^^ |
| Esquirella 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseI really would like it if you would continue! |
| Limited Edition 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseLOL I clicked on this just to see how much I could bash you BWAHAHAHA but oh ** hell it ROCKS. It's classic in the way that it's almost cliché, but hella well-written so it sure makes up for that. By the second half I was laughing my ** off...loudly ._. The mechanics aren't the best but that's alright ^^ The descriptions are really nice (read HAWT). I want more of this! I know it's a oneshot but that's just evil T_T (I'm cute! I can do Bambi-eyes! I deserve it!) |
| Jayn 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it. I hope you update soon cuz its really interesting. ^_^ |
| Back of Beyond 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuselol, loved it! :P would definitely read if you continued. simon's character was just amazing |