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| Reviews for This Way |
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   Basara 9/20/06 . chapter 1ouch... nice.. |
| citrus scented 9/20/06 . chapter 1 oh intriging! this is good, i like how it ends with the ... really effective, but i think theres a typo: suppose/ supposed. ? |
| CrazyTurtles 9/18/06 . chapter 1 Short but with a good message. Keep writing. |
| Ashelin 9/17/06 . chapter 1 Hmm, not an expert on haiku. Good job though, I think I get it... |
| Pandakun84 9/17/06 . chapter 1 Great job on this! I love it! |
| D. A. Emme 9/17/06 . chapter 1 Good poem. It can mean anything basically. |
