|Reviews for This Way|
| Basara 9/20/06 . chapter 1
| citrus scented 9/20/06 . chapter 1
oh intriging! this is good, i like how it ends with the ... really effective, but i think theres a typo: suppose/ supposed. ?
| CrazyTurtles 9/18/06 . chapter 1
Short but with a good message. Keep writing.
| Ashelin 9/17/06 . chapter 1
Hmm, not an expert on haiku. Good job though, I think I get it...
| Pandakun84 9/17/06 . chapter 1
Great job on this! I love it!
| D. A. Emme 9/17/06 . chapter 1
Good poem. It can mean anything basically.