MARIE omg you are so good. but strangely depressing hm. Anywho, get your family out of the house!

Creep but beautiful. Awsome work.

Wolf.

The rhyme is great, as is your word choice. I think it's haunting, but in a subtle kind of way. Great poem!

i like it. it's like short bursts of gunfire...

wow this poem is so amazing! i've been through this and reading this poem made me cry. thats how powerful it is.keep writing.~akasha*

Wow, I love this. I love the structure, and I love the haunting feeling of the words. I also really the narrative.

Very good job!

~Diana♠

Beautifully hopeless...I love it.