Like that other reviewer said, food and love. m. :)

“You taste like lemons,” He says after breaking away, but remaining inches from me.

“Really? You taste like heaven,” I reply and feel the corners of my lips stretch and I realize I’m smiling.

WOW! These two lines made me completely melt! This was too cute. I really liked the story. Yay yay!

Thanks! :D

“You taste like lemons,” He says after breaking away, but remaining inches from me.

“Really? You taste like heaven,” I reply and feel the corners of my lips stretch and I realize I’m smiling.

WOW! These two lines made me completely melt! This was too cute. I really liked the story. Yay yay!

Thanks! :D

The ending was really cute! I liked it a lot!

This is WAY cute. I remember reading it forever ago, before I even had an account. I found it in a C2.

But, yeah, adorable.

hott1 i loved it especally the whole leamon thing. food and love.

Hi!

I really like this story. I love the way it's wriiten and set out, and the ending!

He has a bit of a lemon obsession. Lol.

It's really good!

Favourite line: "The baker who I am completely infatuated with just licked my face."

Very cute!

Sweet! :]

Aww, that's so cute! I notice that you switched tenses a couple times, but it wasn't too noticeable. Great job!

-kyra

Holy shit. You do NOT know how long I've been searching for this story. I read it quite a while ago, and these two lines just stuck with me.

'“You taste like lemons,” He says after breaking away, but remaining inches from me. “Really? You taste like heaven,” I reply and feel the corners of my lips stretch and I realize I’m smiling.'

And I couldn't remember anything else, not even the title, and I was so frustrated because I couldn't find it ANYWHERE! And I think I turned emo for a few hours at least... it was awful. -sniff-

But now here it is! And I couldn't favorite it fast enough, I swear. The writing style isn't anything spectacular or orignial ... its not HOW you're writing, it's WHAT.

Forget plot and grammar and spelling, I'm just madly in love with the feeling behind this piece. You do great work, keep writing!

-Bleep

Aw! That made my heart melt! That was so cute! It's on my faves now!

That was a really sweet story! Ha ha, no pun intended. I would like to meet a true love like that. And I too love lemon flavored, your characters have good taste!

Lovely. Heart-warming.

I liked it a lot. :D

You would not believe how much I adore this. it's so... simply beautiful. you know what i mean? It was lovely. I'm going to go read some more of your stuff!