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| The Datura Rose 2008-04-30 ch 1,  | abuseAh, so true. Very simple, but it has *for lack of a better word* oomph. A certain darkness to it, which is awsome. I love the darkness in stories. ~Sophia |
| theKRITIC 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like this. So true. |
| Professional Dreamer 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abuseI really like the layout of this poem. Being an English Language student, cleverness of this kind interests me greatly :D |
| JenBrat 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI'd say short and sweet, but it isn't sweet at all, which just makes it better (IMHO ;-) more interesing. Very thought provoking. Do we want people to lie to us. . . Even/especially when we KNOW they're lying. . . Nicely written and worded. |
| Cirien Phoenix 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the first line, but in my opinion the sencond line should be in parenthesis and the third should be the one in italics because it seems like italics is what the liar sees/hears. Either way, very creative way of writing this. I do like it. Well done. ~Cirien Phoenix P.S. Thanks for the review on "Bleeding." I know suicide is a serious thing, but sometimes people need to laugh at serious issues to feel better. I meant no harm. I'm glad you did "kinda like it." To me, that's better than nothing. By the way, not just loser nerds get nose bleeds. Low humidity causes them as well, or a broken blood vessel in the nose (as in my case). No offence taken since you said so. :) |
| sarah1491 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuseOoh nice. I love short poems. :) Nicely done!! |
| LIPSTICK,FLAMINGOS,ROCKROLL 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseyou could make an awesome song out of that... i REALLY love it! alot! |
| sharpedgedpen 2006-10-01 ch 1, | abuse*nods* very nice. I like it. It's very interestingly set up. |
| D. A. Emme 2006-10-01 ch 1, | abuseGood poem. |
| Sadistikal 2006-09-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! I liked the short simplicity of this poem! Great Job! I'm always proud to be a freak! -Sadistikal |
| unique different 2006-09-25 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really liked that. I saw that you read my poems, so I decided to read a few of yours. Sorry, I'm not to good with reviews. |
| awannabewriter 2006-09-19 ch 1, | abusehm. last line was unexpected. Why would you want to hear more? Honesty is better. |
| kathleen30263 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseVery angry... |
| commemorativemisery 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abusei like this one good job! |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abusei really liked this one! XP it was cool and yeah lol |