Reviews for Unmerciful Star - FictionPress.com

Alena D'Etoiles 2006-11-10 ch 1,	abuseI loved it. Beautiful!
Vulpes Vulpes 2006-09-26 ch 1,	abuseWow! This is perfect! I love the line, 'And watched the shredded starlight fly/Past suns and planets, tumbling swift and fleet' - it's so beautifully original! This also has a uniquely aged feel about it, and seems to hold such strength and feeling. Yet another fantastic poem, and once again with such an alarming and exceptional clarity about it, which makes it even more wonderful.