Hey!

Well...there's no happy ending! How dissapointing. :( But, all in all, I really like your writing style. You're definitely talented. I hope to see much more from you soon. Oh, and btw, if you want more people to read this, put a summary somewhere, on what it's about. At the beginning of the story, in the summary outline, wherever. It'll get you more reviews, and more attention on a good piece of work. KEEP WRITING!

Luv ya,
Tashi :)