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Meina Vonta Rayne 2006-10-25 ch 3,	abuse^^- Excellent. I love this story thus far. And just in case you didn't notice, you never inserted your country name. "...scurrying about the alley way in 'name of country here'..." Just pointing that out in case you didn't know. If it's supposed to be that way, then don't mind me. Anyway, excellent story. I look forward to much more of it! ^^- Ah, and might I suggest you break up the paragraphs for Tuck's story a bit more. Just a bit.
Myiesha 2006-09-19 ch 1,	abuseomg! this is such a great story (so far) and its so innocent and interesting. perfection!.. well not completely actually in my pov. the people on the ship wouldve been a little more surprised at a talking cat... i know i wouldve been absolutely terrified! but apart from that it was a flawless beginning and the cat reminds me of mogget from the old kingdom series but a little nicer of course because this one doesnt have that much of an attitude problem! :D lol i love it and im gonna read and review the rest tomorroww cause im totally tired right now... oh yes and i thought that this chapter was really well written... and strangely believable. yes so as i have said before.. i love it! and keep writing cause ur really good :D! lolMinal.X
M.R.Sanner 2006-09-19 ch 3,	abuseI l-o-v-e this story ! Seriously it is getting better and better ! I luv the story of how Tuck turned into a talking immortal cat ! It's just brilliant ! Pleas update soon or, or I'll cry ! ::eyes watering :: Thank you for the great reviews ! Yes I know my story is riddeled with erorrs , my best friend and editor ( well a wanna b editor ) is going back and helping me with the first few chapters ! Yay ! And does Trist leave Sage at the bus stop ? Hm , only one way to find out ,read on ( the 3rd chapter is by far my best )
M.R.Sanner 2006-09-18 ch 2,	abuseOh ! I know who tuck reminds me of , Puss in Boots ! No ,not the one from shrek ( did I spell that right ?) , but the one form the actual fairy tale . Puss is one smart cat ,and so is Tuck ! Please hurry and write a new chapter , I love this story ! I can't wait for more !
M.R.Sanner 2006-09-18 ch 1,	abuseoh this is good ! I love talking animals ,especially smart mouth ones ! And the fact that he's a cat makes it even better ! I love how you use description in this and I can't believe no one has commented on it thus far ! Great job ,you have me hooked . PLease return the favor and r&r my story Frogs,Warts and Kisses ( it too has a talking animal or rather a tlaking frog . )

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