A fine poem. The ryming didn't sound forced it flowed and was very connected. ^.^

That was realy beautiful, trust me i know how you feel

This was a very intense poem. The words in it the you used to express everything was very nice.

wow ... the rhythm and angst in this is really well written. the pain and sense of lost shines through.

'because when i fell for you / a part of me has died'

keep it up :)