Reviews for Her Name Was Brittany

Mimay 2007-04-21 ch 1,	abuseI leave this site for a little while (this little while adding up to months) and I tell you now I do not remember you posting this poem! Well point is I'm here to read and comment it, I always loved your poems. lol. it's mimay btw.
Yours Truly 2006-10-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm not a poetry person but I liked this poem. It's very touching, sad but ture.
hi-tanner85 2006-09-22 ch 1,	abusemy name is brittany. and the whole reason i read this was because it had my name in the summary, lol.. but when i read it, it was really good. it's almost got a tune to it, the way i read it anyway. i love it. two thumbs up
BearHeart 2006-09-19 ch 1,	abuseExcellent poem! Two suggestions: I found it distracting to have the repeated line so far from the rest of the poem and in the fifth stanza, there might be more power in "died" versus "dies". I especially like "She held many hearts When she was killed They fell apart" That is so descriptive and touchingly real. Good work.
notated descant. 2006-09-18 ch 1,	abusethis is so sad, but so true. The rhyming's just a tad forced, but it really puts perspective on drinking and driving. It helps you get to know the person before she died. you should put this as a commercial or something lol, good job!
InspiredSpider 2006-09-18 ch 1,	abusethe change from is to was was really effective well done this is a very good piece ~spider~