 big.break.and.laryngitis 2009-10-13 . chapter 14Ahahahahaha. I like this story, because I found it on the LATS website under the love triangle category, and I was throughly convinced that I was going to absolutely hate Simon and want to throw things at his head for disrupting the pretty picture that was Jason and Skye. But I didn't. I mean, it's not that I didn't love Skye, because I did, but I basically felt the way I assume you wanted us to feel-- I loved Skye in the beginning, wanted him to be with Jason, etc, but then I wanted Simon to be with him, more. I still love Skye, though. Skye is adorable. I love him.
Simon, though. Simon is teh sex. Like. Seriously. I cannot even put into words how I feel about Simon. He is teh sex.
Good job on this :) I really like it. |
 XxUnheardxX 2009-10-10 . chapter 14:) This story was really really amazing! I read it because of the LatS awards, and I was having trouble finding good slash... I have to admit, I really wanted Skye and Jason to be together in the beginning, but when Jason and Simon met in the story, I realized Skye was definitely not the one. This is long and rambling and stupid, cause I am telling you things you already know, but the point is that I LOVE this story! :) I think the name fits perfectly.
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 nonaccount 2009-10-08 . chapter 14 This is still one of my all time favorite stories! I came back every once in a while to read this loveliness again and again. Thanks so much for creating and sharing Jason and Simon! |
 S.Carmela.M. 2009-10-07 . chapter 14I really like this story its has a cool twist to it instead of being predictible so I was wondering if this story is over or if your ever going to update? |
 honey splattered brains 2009-09-06 . chapter 14DUUDE i soo took simon's side from that make out scene they had. OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS STORY. i was like smiling and giggling the entire time and i just love how simon acts and talks and how jason is totally head over heels for him. skye kind of disappeared after simon came into the picture though so i guess thats why i like simon more. BUT OMMG. perfect punctuation and spelling and grammar and JUST EVERYTHING. amazing story in general (: |
 Serun 2009-08-30 . chapter 14 I really liked the ending. This story is good because everyone just isn't randomly falling in love with everyone else. The emotions and the way the characters were affected by them seemed real.
I also like how Jason ended up with Simon, I'm not really a fan of the relatives thing, but even at the beginning I thought that Jason's and Skye's relationship was a bit fishy.
Great story. Yay. |
 Serun 2009-08-29 . chapter 3 I found this story on LatS and, I've got to say that so far it is really living up to my expectations. Normally I only review at the end of stories, but there is just one thing I really need to say.
It is completely unnecessary to underline movie titles. In an essay, yes that is correct, but in a story it is distracting. I'm sorry if that is actually grammatically correct and I am wrong, but I really don't think you are supposed to underline movie titles in this kind of writing.
Sorry for my nitpicking. It is a really great story. |
 lee 2009-07-27 . chapter 14 i loved your story! its was mainley good cuz of the twist with simon .and jason not really loving skye-it made it more reall and amazing,i hope you keep writing. |
 VanLichtenstein 2009-06-03 . chapter 14wow, this story was really unexpected. thank you! i'm so used to the predictable romance and i was completely shocked when you broke out of that trend. i loved it |
 Sunny Opitmisum 2009-05-07 . chapter 14=]
aw soo cute!! |
 Gwee 2009-05-04 . chapter 14Ah, I love this story! Normally it's difficult for me to focus on stories, but this one had me drawn in.
I loved Skye in the beginning and was a bit ticked when Simon came into the picture, but you created the story so well that I began to love Simon even more than Skye. |
 Iconic 2009-04-25 . chapter 14This story was absolustly wonderful. It was well written, well developed, completly original and had only a few typos. I had no idea how it was going to end until like three quarters of the way through. Really great. Plus, I'm a sucker for stepbrother romances. Great work, never stop writting because you are amazing! :D |
 thrillerz 2009-04-18 . chapter 14I loved it. Honestly. I really like how you write. I think I'm going to check out what else you've written. :D |
 Xe Grae-King 2009-04-04 . chapter 14 I just spent four hours straight reading this and I have just a few things to say, if you'll indulge me;
One: You made it oh-so easy to except Skye and understand/feel yourself what Jason was. I, at least, felt you wrote all of the characters wonderfully and even the people that you didn't have much use for often (ie. Graham, Heather, etc.) felt natural and quite simply a necessary part of the story.
Two: When I do like/ship original couples (which is rare) I often...dislike...it when the main character or possibly simply a character that I like is paired with someone else than their original boyfriend/girlfriend. (I say "dislike" to avoid swearing. But then, this isn't about what I personally enjoy, is it?) When you introduced Simon as a love-interest I, in all my horrible closed-minded-ness, was about ready to go look for something else to read. But, since you wrote it so impossibly well, I couldn't bring myself to do it and read on, convincing myself that Skye and Jason would be together in the end (how wrong was I?).
I admit, Simon was already growing on my despite Jason’s initial…ehem… “aversion” to the boy just a few sentences into their first written conversation. And then… TADA!! You brought Simon into the scene and gently ushered Skye off to the side “and it was good”. *all hail the magical Goddess who write this*
Three: You made a very wise decision, I think, in introducing Skye as Jason’s “first” love interest, because everybody knows that it is harder than Hell to pull off a convincing story in which the main character is with his first crush from the beginning and stays that way (happily).
Lastly, I just wanted to say that Simon as Jason’s stepbrother was a lovely place to put him, since their related-ness-but-not forced them gently to be around each other. Otherwise, I can quite clearly picture Jason heading for the hills when Simon told him that he loved him.
All it all, lovely, wonderful, glorious story that is now one of my all time favorites (whatever lowly status that may give it your book).
Brava! |
 PoertyQueen 2009-03-29 . chapter 14I really enjoyed this story. I loved that your characters had such depth. Best of luck on your future stories, PQ |
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