That's why I replaced my analagous with a digital. ;)

Great job!

The last line was brilliant, almost even malicious. Really excellnt job!

the Stranger in the moonlight

Hehe, I love it! And I swear, I think time laughs at us all as we try to ignore it.

Once again, very nice. Keep up the beautiful work. )

Very cleverly written, I like this a lot. Great work!

Very nice. I know exactly what this feels like, and the ending made me laugh.

An interesting poem, which I enjoyed reading. I liked the image this gave me. Well done!

I love the last line. This is very good poem. Short and to the point. I feel like this someties. Most of the time actually... Very good.

*::Cat::*

i liked the last line of this. awesome.

The weird thing is...I actually feel like this ALL THE TIME! It's so bad, I've actually lain awake at night staring at the clock...That ticking is ominous. That ticking is life-threatening...it's the inevitable. It's the unavoidable. It's a constant reminder of the frailty of mortality. I guess what I'm trying to say in a round-about way is...I LOVE THIS! Keep writing!

wow totally not was I was expecting. that's good. I like that the clock was ticking in a stieful way. lol.