This is exactly how I feel! I love the poem!

Wow. A beautiful poem, in a sad way. I think this really reflects the soul of every writer. Something very easy for all of us to identify with. Excellent.

wow, very true , good rhymes, can relate. good job!

I really like the style of this, it's definately being faved. I love the way you worded everything, especially the beginning. All in all this is a good piece of work.

ANNA

Really good. I loved how you strung your words together. All the lines are really colorful. I loved all the lines in it, I couldn't pick just a few that were favorites. Nice Write you've got here. :]

-Courtney

nicely done. i think every writer can apreseate this poem.

can't speel to save my life. erAced

yup...great fic that made me laugh about writer's block :P

got the frustration that i feel when i write a poem that i just cant write!

Yo. FI here. I love this one, you should link to it in your profile, because a lot of the writers will find it interesting.

I tried writing some freeverse poems but I dunno if they're very good. Speaking of poetry, I've been writing like WHOA. It's like the inspiration's pouring in but I can't put it to paper fast enough so it's pouring over my shoulders and splashing to the ground where it'll make beautiful tissue-paper flowers...dang, I'm starting to even speak poetically! Oh is there no end to this?

That's how I feel sometimes, this poem, I have a fresh new sheet of paper and I feel if I stare at it too long, the white will absorb my inspiration without retaining any of the color, so I have to write fast.

Okay, very odd...I've managed to inspire myself while reviewing one of your poems...

*goes off to ponder this for a while*

Fading Innocence

'dazzle me with your hypocrisy'

Actually this did make me laugh. Writers block sucks, but you have made it into something interesting although it is every writer nightmare!

LOVE IT!

I love the rhyme scheme here. I had to go back and read it aloud. It doesn't rhyme but it does. I don't know how you pull it off, but it works.

Gr! I hate it when that happens (I hate it when I post my sucky writer's block poems and feel dumb) But you said this so well. Real feeling. Nice work.

Love, Ellen

Yup...that's me in classes!

Esh. Don't we all know that clogged feeling - well captured. Love these lines here:

Chew on an idea, spit it used-up paper clouds

I still think I should get off school when I have writer's block. It's a disease, I tell you!

Heh, good job. You've captured the essence of writer's block.

i like it :)i can definately relate to the horrible frustration, but the poem itself has an almost light tone to it...i really like it :) good job!