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| merrymowmow 2007-08-18 ch 2,  | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| ShadowsSong and Stable 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuseHey, this is the Stable portion of ShadowsSong and Stable. I'm usually the one to leave people reviews over their writings, while replying to their reviews of our stuff. Anyway, I read this big piece of you and RebelStarKitten's and I'll be honest, I have only one word to sum it up: "Wow." I really liked how all of these stories, while short, were massly detailed in how they were written. It really gives a nice prologue to the whole plot. Sorry I didn't read one of your bigger works, but I don't have much time these days, so I didn't want to start up on something big; I might not make it to the end, you know? Anyway, I've got to go now; thanks for the review! We'll be getting back together SOMETIME to work on it some more. (I'm set for internet again, but Trey's still struggling). Thank you, again, and I'll talk to you soon, ok? Stable. |
| BloodyDestiny 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseI like it it's kinda confusing but it's good. |
| Luci-chan's Lunchbox Of Doo... 2006-09-25 ch 1, | abuseTHE TWINS! Twins must be together... ♥'s and X-Rated Thoughts-- Luci-chan |
| myhiddenstory 2006-09-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is so...Wow...I loved how deep and full of imagination and information this story is!!You seem to have this really planned out, and PLEASE! Please update it.. I also have no idea who will be together...But I have a feeling it might get a bit confusing, and Im gonna love it!Update soon!! |
| bambi4real 2006-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abusei like this so far with all the various characters with their different problems. The only problem I can forsee is that each character might not get enough "ch time" so to speak. Personally I don't really understand the last couple and I think I am interested in the first character matching with the guy who just broke up with the jerk. Oh and I want the kid who dresses up in his mom's outfit with the guy who beats everyone up. Mean...I know but I think they would be interesting couples. |
| SeraphiumRose 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseSo far your storyline seems pretty interesting. The characters seem like real people with everyday problems that others can relate to. The way you guys wrote it makes me want to read more. I can not wait for the next update! This is pretty fantastic. =) |