lol i like it. truly i've experienced that and u took the words right out of my mouth. in the end tho i figured out i didn't love him and i'm sure he didn't love me. oh well that's how life goes sometimes. good poem and well written and expressed well even if u haven't experienced it. keep writing!

Cute. And fun. The rhyming was slightly corny, but we all have those moments when we need to write slightly corny poems, right? Nice work.

i like how the beginning is sort of bitter and angry, but the ending is sad and happy (if that makes sense). the repetition was nice, giving a pattern to the poem

That was cute. You could take out some of the 'I hate' parts, it gets a bit repetitive.