   i hOld tHe kEys oF lifE 2006-11-08 . chapter 1I like this. Sometimes I think cutting poems get old but sometimes there are amazing ones that don't make me think that. This is one of them. The descriptive words you used was good and it gave me a visual picture of you looking at the gemstone.
Why the parenthesis on Frigid and ice?
Also, did you write this poem because of something that happened to you? |
 theatrical rhapsodies 2006-10-27 . chapter 1Wow, babe. I love this one. Thats really all I can say...I just, love it.
Who is the "You" you refer to in this poem?
Love, Ellen |
 bittersweet.season 2006-10-20 . chapter 1i love the last stanza! like...woah |
 t3h Butterzfly of Nothing 2006-10-18 . chapter 1I coulda sworn I already reviewed this, but just since I don't see my gaping writing anywhere...
*gapes*
I love the last line. |
 Neurotic Consciousness 2006-10-05 . chapter 1I really like your form in this poem, the imagry, the flow... Good job. |
 s i l e n t x l u c i d i t y 2006-10-04 . chapter 1Beautiful, simply beautiful. For some reason, this makes me think of a character in this book I'm reading. The main character always refers to his skin as 'marble' and such.
I love the last part. It's very meaningful, very.. haunting in a way. |
 sylvia's syndrome 2006-10-01 . chapter 1Hello, love. I really enjoyed this piece… I could almost feel the cold leaking through my computer screen. The last stanza absolutely gave me chills, and I love the notion of loving a statue or someone like a statue. It brings to mind idol worship, which in turn gives the poem a delightfully blasphemous flavor. This piece is inspiring; writing this review is giving me all sorts of ideas. Keep up the great work! |
 Hidden Lies 2006-09-27 . chapter 1*standing ovation* I FRIGGING LOVED THIS! *gaps speechless* |
 Guardrail 2006-09-22 . chapter 1This is beautifully written. I really loved the second stanza. Great work and definately keep writing! |
 MyOtherAlterHyperCube 2006-09-20 . chapter 1 This has a very reminiscent feel to it. I have absolutely no idea what it is about, but, as any poem should, it evokes a feeling. This one evokes someting of an afterglow... only not in the way that it normally would. It is not that warm, it describes more of a dark today as if looking back on a past passion. |
 classic violet 2006-09-20 . chapter 1I love the first stanza especially and I love how this ends. It sent shivers down my spine. |
 this young lady 2006-09-20 . chapter 1one of the best pieces i have read by you.i love short pieces and the format was nice and also easy to read.painful but pretty , which is something i haven't seen many people pull off.i love your first verse.gorgeous. |
 The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2006-09-19 . chapter 1'you are my live snow angel - dyed red with my skin'
amazing piece - as always. the bitterness and imagery flows so smoothly. last stantze is ma fave ;) KEEP IT UP MAN |
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