I feel like crying now...this was just so beautiful. And sad, obviously. The inconsistencies in the style made it real, and I liked how some things had description and others didn't. You did a really great job.

okay. *deep breath* damn, i think i'm going to cry now. ugh. >< too late. really loved it. really, really loved it. i've always thought, "hell, it's just suicide. all you're gonna do is die..." doh, i feel so stupid. i will never laugh when sum1 dies again....not that i ever did, or anything. heh.okz, mebe i wasnt that shallow, but i never thought that much about it, either. oh wellz.the japanese thing amused me, bcoz for sum reason all i cud think about was how japanese ppl used to commit suicide to regain their honour or summin. well, and also the irony of it being cute n pretti n stuff. sort of amusing despite the angst.love it.

aww...*tear* very sad and emotive. i think the end was a bit...well, it was ok, except for the 'love.' bit, which didn't seem to fit in. and some of the description was too formal in comparison to the tone of the rest of it. but well written all the same.