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kisses in the rain
Rhythm.Of.My.Soul
2006-09-19 . chapter 1
It's more like two paragraphs rather than a story or a chapter.
And it was kind of awkward, most of the story was, I did this, i did that... You need to vary the beginning of your sentences.
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