Of course i had to come read the one thing you still had posted, and it was amazing. :) so so good. -rowena

yup. the story was good, even though it was a bit cliche and stuff. i mean, the part where the popular guy falls in love with the isolated girl.

and the dying-because-of-a-car-crash part.

but it was still very well-written, i think :)

anyway, it was a nice story :]

heehee, awesome short story :)
-- Christina

JESUS, that was really sad, sucks to be him. when they finally meet she dies. damn.

okayy.. that made me cry.. good one :D

Aw, poor Shane :( She never got to hear him say that he loves her.

Again, I read this way after you posted so... yeah. Now I'm gonna go read more of your stories =]

: O

If he had just... called out to her, came up to her, tripped over her, spilled coffee on her... if he had done SOMETHING, than she would be alive. Oh my god.

Sad.

this is so sad

WOW!...that was amazing!! soo sadd that she had to die and they couldnt know of their love for each other bt amazing writing and amazing one shot! I loved it! Cant wait to read more of your writings! :D
HaTeFuL LoViNg

Fantastic story!


xx

=00 i cant believe it! =/ just as when they see each other again she dies... great!


but this story is really good =]

what a super sad story... It's so nice even if the ending was so sad... Still love it..

So sad...you like killing your characters don't you? Oh well, I guess it's just the price he had to pay. Nicely written. Good job.

Aww, bloody hell, that just tore me up =( It's wrong, wrong, wrong for her to die! :D I still love this, mainly because it's awesome the way that they don't have a happy ending. Too many stories do and too little people do...

...I'm SUCH a sadist.

FUCK.
:((

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Oh, man. Such a sweet depressing story!! :p So much emotion...I loved it! =D