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Reviews For: The Shadow Passed
InkandPaper 2006-09-24 . chapter 1
Yeah, it does show a change of mood. Not wildly happy but content with the world and being able to admire its beauty again. I like it!!
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2006-09-19 . chapter 1
'the sound of laughter ringing aloud'

i aint read 'when laughter died' but this poem is amazing, whether i understand it or not. i love the imagery, there is so much to comment on yet so little time - keep it up :D
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