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| punkturnedwriter 2006-09-26 ch 1,  | abuseWow, I loved this poem. It sounds like a song. I love the part about the devil's music and the laughter that used to brighten her mother's day...my mom would be sure to relate to that. And "she withdraws/deep into herself" has a very nice rhythm to it. Keep writing! |
| Socially-Awkward 2006-09-23 ch 1, | abusethis is really good, but sad...hey since when is AFI the Devil's music?...I didn't know the devil had gone punk-rock...lol |
| Consolation 2006-09-19 ch 1, | abusekinda sad type poem, at least from the parent's point of view... how different our take on our lives are then our parent's take on our lives... makes me think... *ouch* that hurt lol |
| Cait Street 2006-09-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, my mom thinks that way about me. it was great how you tapped into a mothers mind. I really like it a lot. I give a big WOOT!(lol) |
| rambling soul 2006-09-19 ch 1, | abuseyou may not feel it...but i do. i dont want to lose two friends. i think i will if this goes on. |