 Little girl Big world 2009-09-20 . chapter 3Definitely adding this collection to my favorites. |
 Little girl Big world 2009-09-20 . chapter 2wow. wonderfully written |
 Little girl Big world 2009-09-20 . chapter 1This is great and I love the title. |
 no.peace.los.angeles 2007-01-15 . chapter 1Oh, that is crazy. I love it. Since when does the sea wink naughty thoughts? Haha, it's great. Love it. Keep writing! :) |
 myno 2006-11-01 . chapter 2ach, I love the images in this one. |
 simpleplan13 2006-10-30 . chapter 3interesting... the title explains it all |
 simpleplan13 2006-10-30 . chapter 2beautiful |
 simpleplan13 2006-10-30 . chapter 1I love the dirty brown and naughty thoughts thing |
 not sure yet 2006-10-18 . chapter 3is this a series or just separate poems? cause i was reading them as each one different but it has a slight feel of continuning from one another but skipping a lot of the stuff in between...anywayz
muchly like this one as well, makes me think of that tingly feeling you get on the back of your neck when you feel like youre being watched, excellent little poem |
 not sure yet 2006-10-18 . chapter 2o, it's very warm feeling and dark, like love should be, lovely job |
 not sure yet 2006-10-18 . chapter 1o, i absolutely adore this one! im so envious of people who can manage to fit so much into a short amount of space and with a perfect image too, beautifully beautifully done |
 bread and circuses 2006-10-05 . chapter 1Oh, I *love* the flow in this. It feels effortless. |
 Aquafied 2006-10-04 . chapter 1this has a tinge of mermaid thoughts to it
then again, the metaphor is completly out to the world |
 Aquafied 2006-10-04 . chapter 2seems spacial |
 Aquafied 2006-09-25 . chapter 3i am afraid living in sorrow, you forget to register all else as not being sorrow. |