That was very good. You drew the characters and the species uncommonly well for a short story (even if there was a bit of superfluous information here and there), and it was all very sweet. The Harpy's sister came off a bit overly mean, but the paragraph where she flew off was a nice bit of prose.

Mostly what I thought this could have used was a good bit of editing... there were some grammar and spelling mistakes, and occasionally it got a little repetitive. Would you like a beta? I'd love to do it for you because I think you have mad skills.