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| sylvia's syndrome 2006-09-19 ch 1,  | abuseThere is some nice imagery in this piece, and the diction in quite powerful. I did notice one persistent mistake, however: you kept writing “threw” when you should have written “through.” Other than that mistake, this was well done. Keep up the good work! |