I like the use of bold and italics. It makes a poem more interesting to read.

However, I did not praticularly like this poem. I do not think all the swearing was needed, although some people do.

The format is kind of interesting, but the poem is very.. well.. crude. No offense to you, but I did not think this was anything special. Good luck with future poems. :)

- Sarah

You have an absolute talent that I wish I could just get a taste of. You really inspire me. from 'smoke is an addiction' down is excellent to me. I love the imagery and I love the language. I applaud you.