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2008-08-18 ch 21, anon. | abuseAbsalutly wonderful this and the second one which I have just finished up to its updated point. The story is raw with emotion and life that you can't help but to laugh and cry at different points in the story. Well done. ~Obsession |
| outsidersgirl 2008-07-22 ch 21,  | abusethis is good |
| IiotComputerLetMeOn 2008-06-22 ch 1, | abuseSounds like an interesting story so far! |
| Simply-Crazy 2008-06-07 ch 21, | abuseWow. I don't think I've come that close to tears while reading the story in a long time. You have a wonderful gift for portraying all types of relationships, which makes the betrayal hurt even more. There was practically no element of superficiality in this story and I think I really needed it today because I was feeling a bit down. On a lighter note, you know the song The Middle? I felt it matched some parts of this story incredibly well. |
| -RomanticallyCliched- 2008-05-08 ch 21, | abusesweet. happy ending for now? |
| Alexiana 2008-04-08 ch 21, | abuseThat's awesome. Great story. I read it in one go and it kinda makes you just sigh in contentment at the end :) kudos! |
| SapphireEyes16 2008-04-02 ch 21, | abusei luv this story, the ending was brilliant! |
| a beginner 2008-03-27 ch 21, | abusegood |
| mylifeismine 2008-03-24 ch 21, | abuseVery cute:D |
| anitsirK 2008-03-20 ch 21, | abuseMarvelous! Truly one of the most well-written stories in Fictionpress! It does need editing, I'll agree. But it is a very good story. Very good plot and excellent writing. You didn't rush it or prolong it like some of the others. It's just right. Just the right pace, to keep us entertained and at the same time, not bored. Very good job. :) |
| funnechick 2008-03-15 ch 21, | abuseSo I just read through this whole story today. It was so amazing and captivating. It wasn't just a simple romance story, it was also laced with mystery and drama--I mean, when all the betrayal was revealed about Brianna's mother and Daniel's father...I was so shocked and I couldn't believe it. And just the fact that you could think up a story that has so many layers, again, it really just amazes me. Reading this story was such a great journey. Thank you for writing it, and especially for finishing it. |
| Miss. Paradox 2008-03-14 ch 21, | abuseI loved it! Great idea and the writing was edited well so really, no complaints on my side. And of course, who wouldn't love the sappy ending? Perfect, haha. So: yeah, great job! |
| JusticeWriter 2008-03-13 ch 21, | abuseAw. This was great! |
| Oblivious.Only.To.You 2008-03-03 ch 21, | abuseyayy omgg i heart this story. :D so good. write more, please. |
| heartfeltlove 2008-02-25 ch 21, | abuseThe end!! Awesome story! I loved it |