No worries. This is where these things get written down- or typed out, so to speak. You can write whatever ails you, whatever some jerk said, and no one is going to penalize you for it.

I'll be waiting for the next update. That's what the emails are for. Believe me, I've got a story that I can't believe that I finished. And the people reading waited months between chaps sometimes. and "you're welcome, the pleasure is all mine."

be well.

dm

Once again, nice descriptions.

Did you mean twelve in the afternoon when he woke up? Twelve in the morning would be quite early. :)

DM

Nice intro. A few grammar and spelling blips here and there. But I loved the detail in description.

Be well.

DM