| Reviews for Lost Wedding Plans |
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R.G. Angel 5/24/07 . chapter 1Oh! This is beautiful! It sounds like something my sisters and I talked about once... We didn't want to have to get all dressed up at three different times to attend each other's weddings so we wanted to get married all at the same time! We'll have to see how it turns out... so far there haven't been any prince charmings for any of us! Yet... Great job! |
All Alone With Her Thoughts 9/24/06 . chapter 1Excellent job, like usual. |
SirScott 9/21/06 . chapter 1Good poem. Keep it up. Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, SirScott |
Salkiethia 9/20/06 . chapter 1Overall a very great poem. I like the flow of it, and the underlying sadness you've placed in your writing. The technical aspects - forgive me if I seem nit-picky - are what bother me. The 11th line 'your' should be 'you're'. Like I said, that's just me being nit-picky. You've done a great job with this piece. |