I don't understand this: Your writing is gorgeous, your themes are deeply human, starkly honest. Why are you not getting tons of positive feedback?

I love your writing. It is descriptive and abstract, with unique metaphors and well-suited allusions. Please keep creating. I have read very few works on fictionpress written this way so I hope you will not abandon writing. I would love to see a novel-length story. However, these short snippets are wonderful too.

That's a heart breaking story, very well written. I like your choice of words and the description is awesome. I can't begin to fathom how the children must feel, but you've done well in capturing some of their emotions.

This story breaks my heart. Very well written. I can feel what the children feel.