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violet-eyez 2009-11-10 . chapter 2
does he like her?
Reticence 2009-10-28 . chapter 2
haha interesting, can't wait to see where this goes... ;)
juliet soo belongs with paris 2009-10-15 . chapter 2
you probably don"t even remember this story but its really good so please continue writing. It really good. Your an amazing writer just hurry up ok!
sukanya 2009-07-29 . chapter 2
Wow. This looks like fun.. but i'm assuming an update isn't happening anytime soon?? :P

SUkanya
street Kid 2009-07-07 . chapter 2
Brilliant story.
Can't wait for more. :)
nutbuster 2009-06-27 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness, as I was reading the summary for this, I couldn't help but think 'damn' along with Alex. This version is wonderful, so please go on! I hope you're out of this block soon.

The only thing I'm confused about is the science class. Alex is sitting next to Travis, right? So why does she turn around to get his phone? Wouldn't she just reach over?
forever after 2009-06-20 . chapter 2
well... i really think you should continue with this story. it's good and i really want to see how it turns out. but you obviously haven't updated in a long time so... whenever you get to it i guess.
goldenspork 2009-06-14 . chapter 2
Oh, I want more. :)
RunFree 2009-06-11 . chapter 2
you need to update...UPDATE>...what are u doing UPDATE
klutz.for.life 2009-04-26 . chapter 2
ni-ice. loved the kiss at the end. will ben be appearing later on? i think that'd be fun. some competition between rival schools, plus he seems decent. :D love how all the people alex knows are all plotting against her, but shouldn't at least Kayla be on her side? A girl's gotta have at least one person who, while not necessarily having to agree with her, but at least sympathizes with her. Well, that's my opinion anyways. But great story so far and I can't wait to read more! :D
klutz.for.life 2009-04-26 . chapter 1
hahahaha. sorry, i just had to laugh. I really thought the soccer bag would've been a sign, but hey, I've been in a similar situation, too (stuck my foot in my mouth when all the obvious signs of "something" were right there in front of me). lol
welcome to meganland 2009-03-18 . chapter 2
I love it so far! I can't wait to read the rest! I hope you havent forgotten about this story, because I'm hela curious. I cant figure out which one this will be... "I've loved you forever" or "I fell in love with you" hm.

Please write the net chapter, I would like to know.

:)
ess3sandra 2009-03-16 . chapter 2
its a great story, it has alot of potential, jsut to many charachters in the beginning to survey. else great, hot and fummy.
ess3sandra 2009-03-16 . chapter 1
ha, this is great fun. make the freshie kick her sometime!!
heidipandabear 2009-03-08 . chapter 2
i'm wondering if conner actually likes alex.
because if he didn't why would the dating thing be an option.
wouldn't he just want the money?

well, anyways, good stuff.
update soon!
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