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| Autumn Reflections 2006-09-20 ch 3,  | abusei really, really like this one!! It is emotional and very well structured like your other two. This one has great potential. Keep writing Autumn |
| Autumn Reflections 2006-09-20 ch 2, | abusethere are some words in this one that could be changed to give it more feel because it seems a little weak in parts, yet it is well written and finely structures as your last one with an easy flow. well done. keep writing autumn |
| Autumn Reflections 2006-09-20 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful! I really like how you structured it, it keeps the rhythm and gives it something different. Keep writing. Autumn |
| Princess-anna57 2006-09-20 ch 1, | abuse:( Aww, that's quite sad. Well expressed. Keep writing! ~Anna~ |