This is great. I can sense the helplessness in this. And I think I do believe you about the whole prayer thing. It's really not just a religous practice. Great work!

i LOVE LOVE LOVE the last line.

I understand where you're coming from, about it being spiritual. Great work! Beautiful wording in this one.

Again really nice work. Second word "your" and third last line "kneel". You have a way with words that is truly beautiful.

this is beautiful and i can understand why you didnt put it in religion. very well written.

keep writing

autumn

Great job, I like this a lot. Keep it up.

Anna _