Beautiful, soft and i can really identify. so sorry i havent been on for ages appear to be suffering from writers block aswell as lack of time :( will try and review your stuff more often Duck8 x

I love the last two lines, such a beautiful and heartfelt piece. It reflects reality so well and you write it brilliantly.
Amazing work! You're such a great writer!
Lots of luvv,
Vix x

i will perish too-that is the best line out of this

a bit cliche but has some good lines within it