this chapter was really really good.. i cant wait for another update! Leaving the Light was the first story i read on fanfiction, and its also my favorite, i havent found one story on there that i like better than that one, and i love Season of Darkness too.. i cant wait for the end though.. lol, sorry if that sounded rude, but what i mean is, all the questions are answered in the end, and i cant wait until it all makes sence lol.. love the story, cant wait for an update, keep up the good work

-Cady

this is awesome!! more updates please!

Really, really good! can't wait for you to write more...i started reading this story last April..well, Leaving the Light...and now Season of Darkness...cant wait for another post!! hurry...please? lol

Hm...I like where this is going but...I'm alil scared for Toni I know she loves suicide and all but maybe this time was just careless, I mean hunters and all

you finally uploaded the next chapter!! lol..what took you so long?

when is the next update? i cant wait for you to update. in dying to read what comes nest. please hurry! i dont think i can wait much longer...so again...please hurry! :)

WHERE IS THE REST OF THE STORY PLEASE DON"T LEAVE ME HANGING!

I'm absolutely in love with the story! I've been reading it for a week... both the first book and this one are amazing. The characters are really complex, and you describe them and their feelings marvelously.

I can't wait for the following chapters...! :)

Thank you for sharing this story with us... I love it!

XOX
Letty

PS: I noted the last chapter has " before some lines, even though they are not dialogues :)

So many cliff-hangers! xD But wow, I've been following this story since I read the first book, and it's just fantastic. ^_^

Keep up the amazing work, these lengthy chapters are always worth the wait. :D

This is my first time reviewing but I have read the whole story and I have to say, I love it! A lot! I am always excited when you update cause I just can't wait to read more! You really are an awesome author and I just love reading about vampires! ha! Awesome possum, can't wait for the next chapter!

Hm... It almost seems to me as if Toni took the idea that Bram had fallen in love with her before a little too easily. I know I wouldn't take the idea very well. It also makes me wonder what made this particular incarnation for "Toni" so special that Bram chose to take her out of society and live with the vampires after apparently just "watching over" her soul for so long. Hope that particular plot bunny gets chased at some point.

this second part was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.

Your stories are Fantastic!

*Adds to Favorites List* n.n

Another chapter, this one quite fast, and still interesting.

I agree with Siti Marie about the formating of the early chapters though, an update would bring more readers.

I just spent a very enjoyable couple of days reading this story from one end to the other. I found it engaging, interesting and exciting. You have a lot of talent, and I can see that your writing ability has developed as you wrote this story.

One thing, however, concerns me. Early on in the story, especially the scene where the vampires kept pushing Toni into the stream at the gathering, I was getting major deja vu, like I'd seen that scene before. As the story as a whole was new to me, this confused me. It may be possible that I simply read a small portion of this story at a previous time, but I rather doubt that is the case. I would love to know if you derived some sort of inspiration for that scene from somewhere, because honestly the deja vu is driving me crazy.

A small area of critique which I see you have corrected in this new "Book" is the format. I will admit I almost stopped reading your story in the first chapter due to the way the words were shoved to the left. Perhaps you could update the story in a new style format. I guarantee that it would improve your readership.

In any case, I was impressed with this story. It is difficult to find good origional fiction online, especially of the vampire sort. I rarely review, so congrats at dragging an old bear out of her cave.